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    Florida Senate - 2006                                  SB 2688

    By Senator Haridopolos





    26-1424A-06                                        See HB 1295

  1                      A bill to be entitled

  2         An act relating to paperwork reduction in the

  3         school districts; amending s. 1001.42, F.S.,

  4         relating to powers and duties of district

  5         school boards; revising provisions relating to

  6         required school improvement plans; revising

  7         content of such plans; requiring public

  8         hearings and analysis relating to excess

  9         paperwork and data collection; requiring

10         district school board establishment of a task

11         force to reduce paper and electronic reporting

12         requirements; providing task force duties;

13         amending s. 1003.415, F.S.; deleting the

14         personalized middle school success plan;

15         amending s. 1008.25, F.S., relating to student

16         progression; requiring implementation of

17         progress-monitoring plans and deleting student

18         improvement plans; providing planning options

19         to improve student academic achievement;

20         deleting certain provisions relating to student

21         remediation; amending ss. 411.227, 1002.20,

22         1003.51, and 1003.52, F.S.; conforming

23         provisions; providing an effective date.

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25  Be It Enacted by the Legislature of the State of Florida:

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27         Section 1.  Paragraph (a) of subsection (16) of section

28  1001.42, Florida Statutes, is amended, subsection (22) is

29  renumbered as subsection (23), and a new subsection (22) is

30  added to that section, to read:

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 1         1001.42  Powers and duties of district school

 2  board.--The district school board, acting as a board, shall

 3  exercise all powers and perform all duties listed below:

 4         (16)  IMPLEMENT SCHOOL IMPROVEMENT AND

 5  ACCOUNTABILITY.--Maintain a system of school improvement and

 6  education accountability as provided by statute and State

 7  Board of Education rule. This system of school improvement and

 8  education accountability shall be consistent with, and

 9  implemented through, the district's continuing system of

10  planning and budgeting required by this section and ss.

11  1008.385, 1010.01, and 1011.01. This system of school

12  improvement and education accountability shall include, but is

13  not limited to, the following:

14         (a)  School improvement plans.--Annually approve and

15  require implementation of a new, amended, or continuation

16  school improvement plan for each school in the district that

17  is designated as performance grade category "C" or below or

18  that is required to have a school improvement plan under

19  federal law, except that a district school board may establish

20  a district school improvement plan that includes all schools

21  in the district operating for the purpose of providing

22  educational services to youth in Department of Juvenile

23  Justice programs. The district school board may require a

24  school that is designated as performance grade category "A" or

25  "B" to complete a school improvement plan. A school

26  improvement Such plan shall be designed to achieve the state

27  education priorities pursuant to s. 1000.03(5) and student

28  performance standards. In addition, any school required to

29  implement a rigorous reading requirement pursuant to s.

30  1003.415 must include such component in its school improvement

31  plan. Each plan shall address student achievement goals and

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 1  strategies based on state and school district proficiency

 2  standards. The plan may also address issues relative to other

 3  academic-related matters budget, training, instructional

 4  materials, technology, staffing, student support services,

 5  specific school safety and discipline strategies, student

 6  health and fitness, including physical fitness, parental

 7  information on student health and fitness, and indoor

 8  environmental air quality, and other matters of resource

 9  allocation, as determined by district school board policy, and

10  shall be based on an analysis of student achievement and other

11  school performance data.

12         (22)  REDUCE PAPERWORK AND DATA COLLECTION AND

13  REPORTING REQUIREMENTS.--

14         (a)  Paperwork and data collection.--Hold extensive

15  public hearings and provide detailed analysis of burden hours

16  needed to complete paperwork, hard copies, and electronic

17  copies required under a state mandate if the district school

18  board will exceed paperwork and data collection requirements

19  of the state mandate. "Burden hours" are defined as the amount

20  of time required to gather, compile, complete, transmit, and

21  report information.

22         (b)  Task force.--Establish a task force to reduce the

23  paper and electronic reporting requirements that impact the

24  school district, which may include the duties specified in s.

25  1008.385(2)(b). A majority of the task force members must be

26  classroom teachers with additional members including, but not

27  limited to, one exceptional student education teacher, school

28  administrators, district-level personnel, and the district

29  school superintendent. The task force must seek to reduce the

30  burden hours required of school district staff by making

31  recommendations to the district school board on ways to

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 1  reduce, eliminate, revise, or consolidate requirements

 2  relating to, but not limited to, student attendance, student

 3  behavior, and teacher lesson plans. The task force must

 4  annually report its actions and recommendations to the

 5  Department of Education. The department shall review the

 6  annual reports and progress of each school district task force

 7  and, based on such information, provide its recommendations to

 8  school districts for reduction, elimination, revision, or

 9  consolidation of paper and electronic reporting requirements.

10         Section 2.  Subsection (8) of section 1003.415, Florida

11  Statutes, is renumbered as subsection (7) and present

12  subsection (7) of that section is amended to read:

13         1003.415  The Middle Grades Reform Act.--

14         (7)  PERSONALIZED MIDDLE SCHOOL SUCCESS PLAN.--

15         (a)  Beginning with the 2004-2005 school year, each

16  principal of a school with a middle grade shall designate

17  certified staff members at the school to develop and

18  administer a personalized middle school success plan for each

19  entering sixth grade student who scored below Level 3 in

20  reading on the most recently administered FCAT. The purpose of

21  the success plan is to assist the student in meeting state and

22  school district expectations in academic proficiency and to

23  prepare the student for a rigorous high school curriculum. The

24  success plan shall be developed in collaboration with the

25  student and his or her parent and must be implemented until

26  the student completes the eighth grade or achieves a score at

27  Level 3 or above in reading on the FCAT, whichever occurs

28  first. The success plan must minimize paperwork and may be

29  incorporated into a parent/teacher conference, included as

30  part of a progress report or report card, included as part of

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 1  a general orientation at the beginning of the school year, or

 2  provided by electronic mail or other written correspondence.

 3         (b)  The personalized middle school success plan must:

 4         1.  Identify educational goals and intermediate

 5  benchmarks for the student in the core curriculum areas which

 6  will prepare the student for high school.

 7         2.  Be based upon academic performance data and an

 8  identification of the student's strengths and weaknesses.

 9         3.  Include academic intervention strategies with

10  frequent progress monitoring.

11         4.  Provide innovative methods to promote the student's

12  advancement which may include, but not be limited to, flexible

13  scheduling, tutoring, focus on core curricula, online

14  instruction, an alternative learning environment, or other

15  interventions that have been shown to accelerate the learning

16  process.

17         (c)  The personalized middle school success plan must

18  be incorporated into any individual student plan required by

19  federal or state law, including the academic improvement plan

20  required in s. 1008.25, an individual education plan (IEP) for

21  a student with disabilities, a federal 504 plan, or an ESOL

22  plan.

23         (d)  The Department of Education shall provide

24  technical assistance for districts, school administrators, and

25  instructional personnel regarding the development of

26  personalized middle school success plans. The assistance shall

27  include strategies and techniques designed to maximize

28  interaction between students, parents, teachers, and other

29  instructional and administrative staff while minimizing

30  paperwork.

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 1         Section 3.  Subsection (4), paragraphs (b) and (c) of

 2  subsection (6), and paragraph (b) of subsection (7) of section

 3  1008.25, Florida Statutes, are amended to read:

 4         1008.25  Public school student progression; remedial

 5  instruction; reporting requirements.--

 6         (4)  ASSESSMENT AND REMEDIATION.--

 7         (a)  Each student must participate in the statewide

 8  assessment tests required by s. 1008.22. Each student who does

 9  not meet specific levels of performance as determined by the

10  district school board in reading, writing, science, and

11  mathematics for each grade level, or who does not meet

12  specific levels of performance as determined by the

13  commissioner on statewide assessments at selected grade

14  levels, must be provided with additional diagnostic

15  assessments to determine the nature of the student's

16  difficulty and areas of academic need.

17         (b)  The school in which the student is enrolled must

18  develop, in consultation with the student's parent, and must

19  implement a progress-monitoring plan. A progress-monitoring

20  plan is intended to provide the school district and the school

21  flexibility in meeting the academic needs of the student and

22  to reduce paperwork. A student who is not meeting the school

23  district or state requirements for proficiency shall be

24  covered by one of the following plans to target instruction

25  and identify ways to improve his or her academic achievement:

26         1.  A federally required student plan such as an

27  individual education plan;

28         2.  A schoolwide system of progress monitoring for all

29  students; or

30         3.  An individualized progress-monitoring plan.

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 1  The plan chosen must be an academic improvement plan designed

 2  to assist the student or the school in meeting state and

 3  district expectations for proficiency. For a student for whom

 4  a personalized middle school success plan is required pursuant

 5  to s. 1003.415, the middle school success plan must be

 6  incorporated in the student's academic improvement plan.

 7  Beginning with the 2002-2003 school year, if the student has

 8  been identified as having a deficiency in reading, the

 9  academic improvement plan shall identify the student's

10  specific areas of deficiency in phonemic awareness, phonics,

11  fluency, comprehension, and vocabulary; the desired levels of

12  performance in these areas; and the instructional and support

13  services to be provided to meet the desired levels of

14  performance. Schools shall also provide for the frequent

15  monitoring of the student's progress in meeting the desired

16  levels of performance. District school boards shall assist

17  schools and teachers to implement research-based reading

18  activities that have been shown to be successful in teaching

19  reading to low-performing students. Remedial instruction

20  provided during high school may not be in lieu of English and

21  mathematics credits required for graduation.

22         (c)  Upon subsequent evaluation, if the documented

23  deficiency has not been remediated in accordance with the

24  academic improvement plan, the student may be retained. Each

25  student who does not meet the minimum performance expectations

26  defined by the Commissioner of Education for the statewide

27  assessment tests in reading, writing, science, and mathematics

28  must continue to be provided with remedial or supplemental

29  instruction until the expectations are met or the student

30  graduates from high school or is not subject to compulsory

31  school attendance.

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 1         (6)  ELIMINATION OF SOCIAL PROMOTION.--

 2         (b)  The district school board may only exempt students

 3  from mandatory retention, as provided in paragraph (5)(b), for

 4  good cause. Good cause exemptions shall be limited to the

 5  following:

 6         1.  Limited English proficient students who have had

 7  less than 2 years of instruction in an English for Speakers of

 8  Other Languages program.

 9         2.  Students with disabilities whose individual

10  education plan indicates that participation in the statewide

11  assessment program is not appropriate, consistent with the

12  requirements of State Board of Education rule.

13         3.  Students who demonstrate an acceptable level of

14  performance on an alternative standardized reading assessment

15  approved by the State Board of Education.

16         4.  Students who demonstrate, through a student

17  portfolio, that the student is reading on grade level as

18  evidenced by demonstration of mastery of the Sunshine State

19  Standards in reading equal to at least a Level 2 performance

20  on the FCAT.

21         5.  Students with disabilities who participate in the

22  FCAT and who have an individual education plan or a Section

23  504 plan that reflects that the student has received the

24  intensive remediation in reading, as required by paragraph

25  (4)(b), for more than 2 years but still demonstrates a

26  deficiency in reading and was previously retained in

27  kindergarten, grade 1, grade 2, or grade 3.

28         6.  Students who have received the intensive

29  remediation in reading as required by paragraph (4)(b) for 2

30  or more years but still demonstrate a deficiency in reading

31  and who were previously retained in kindergarten, grade 1,

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 1  grade 2, or grade 3 for a total of 2 years. Intensive reading

 2  instruction for students so promoted must include an altered

 3  instructional day based upon an academic improvement plan that

 4  includes specialized diagnostic information and specific

 5  reading strategies for each student. The district school board

 6  shall assist schools and teachers to implement reading

 7  strategies that research has shown to be successful in

 8  improving reading among low-performing readers.

 9         (c)  Requests for good cause exemptions for students

10  from the mandatory retention requirement as described in

11  subparagraphs (b)3. and 4. shall be made consistent with the

12  following:

13         1.  Documentation shall be submitted from the student's

14  teacher to the school principal that indicates that the

15  promotion of the student is appropriate and is based upon the

16  student's academic record. In order to minimize paperwork

17  requirements, such documentation shall consist only of the

18  existing academic improvement plan, individual educational

19  plan, if applicable, report card, or student portfolio.

20         2.  The school principal shall review and discuss such

21  recommendation with the teacher and make the determination as

22  to whether the student should be promoted or retained. If the

23  school principal determines that the student should be

24  promoted, the school principal shall make such recommendation

25  in writing to the district school superintendent. The district

26  school superintendent shall accept or reject the school

27  principal's recommendation in writing.

28         (7)  SUCCESSFUL PROGRESSION FOR RETAINED READERS.--

29         (b)  Beginning with the 2004-2005 school year, each

30  school district shall:

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 1         1.  Conduct a review of student academic improvement

 2  plans for all students who did not score above Level 1 on the

 3  reading portion of the FCAT and did not meet the criteria for

 4  one of the good cause exemptions in paragraph (6)(b). The

 5  review shall address additional supports and services, as

 6  described in this subsection, needed to remediate the

 7  identified areas of reading deficiency. The school district

 8  shall require a student portfolio to be completed for each

 9  such student.

10         2.  Provide students who are retained under the

11  provisions of paragraph (5)(b) with intensive instructional

12  services and supports to remediate the identified areas of

13  reading deficiency, including a minimum of 90 minutes of

14  daily, uninterrupted, scientifically research-based reading

15  instruction and other strategies prescribed by the school

16  district, which may include, but are not limited to:

17         a.  Small group instruction.

18         b.  Reduced teacher-student ratios.

19         c.  More frequent progress monitoring.

20         d.  Tutoring or mentoring.

21         e.  Transition classes containing 3rd and 4th grade

22  students.

23         f.  Extended school day, week, or year.

24         g.  Summer reading camps.

25         3.  Provide written notification to the parent of any

26  student who is retained under the provisions of paragraph

27  (5)(b) that his or her child has not met the proficiency level

28  required for promotion and the reasons the child is not

29  eligible for a good cause exemption as provided in paragraph

30  (6)(b). The notification must comply with the provisions of s.

31  1002.20(14) and must include a description of proposed

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 1  interventions and supports that will be provided to the child

 2  to remediate the identified areas of reading deficiency.

 3         4.  Implement a policy for the midyear promotion of any

 4  student retained under the provisions of paragraph (5)(b) who

 5  can demonstrate that he or she is a successful and independent

 6  reader, reading at or above grade level, and ready to be

 7  promoted to grade 4. Tools that school districts may use in

 8  reevaluating any student retained may include subsequent

 9  assessments, alternative assessments, and portfolio reviews,

10  in accordance with rules of the State Board of Education.

11  Students promoted during the school year after November 1 must

12  demonstrate proficiency above that required to score at Level

13  2 on the grade 3 FCAT, as determined by the State Board of

14  Education. The State Board of Education shall adopt standards

15  that provide a reasonable expectation that the student's

16  progress is sufficient to master appropriate 4th grade level

17  reading skills.

18         5.  Provide students who are retained under the

19  provisions of paragraph (5)(b) with a high-performing teacher

20  as determined by student performance data and

21  above-satisfactory performance appraisals.

22         6.  In addition to required reading enhancement and

23  acceleration strategies, provide parents of students to be

24  retained with at least one of the following instructional

25  options:

26         a.  Supplemental tutoring in scientifically

27  research-based reading services in addition to the regular

28  reading block, including tutoring before and/or after school.

29         b.  A "Read at Home" plan outlined in a parental

30  contract, including participation in "Families Building Better

31  Readers Workshops" and regular parent-guided home reading.

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 1         c.  A mentor or tutor with specialized reading

 2  training.

 3         7.  Establish a Reading Enhancement and Acceleration

 4  Development (READ) Initiative. The focus of the READ

 5  Initiative shall be to prevent the retention of grade 3

 6  students and to offer intensive accelerated reading

 7  instruction to grade 3 students who failed to meet standards

 8  for promotion to grade 4 and to each K-3 student who is

 9  assessed as exhibiting a reading deficiency. The READ

10  Initiative shall:

11         a.  Be provided to all K-3 students at risk of

12  retention as identified by the statewide assessment system

13  used in Reading First schools. The assessment must measure

14  phonemic awareness, phonics, fluency, vocabulary, and

15  comprehension.

16         b.  Be provided during regular school hours in addition

17  to the regular reading instruction.

18         c.  Provide a state-identified reading curriculum that

19  has been reviewed by the Florida Center for Reading Research

20  at Florida State University and meets, at a minimum, the

21  following specifications:

22         (I)  Assists students assessed as exhibiting a reading

23  deficiency in developing the ability to read at grade level.

24         (II)  Provides skill development in phonemic awareness,

25  phonics, fluency, vocabulary, and comprehension.

26         (III)  Provides scientifically based and reliable

27  assessment.

28         (IV)  Provides initial and ongoing analysis of each

29  student's reading progress.

30         (V)  Is implemented during regular school hours.

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 1         (VI)  Provides a curriculum in core academic subjects

 2  to assist the student in maintaining or meeting proficiency

 3  levels for the appropriate grade in all academic subjects.

 4         8.  Establish at each school, where applicable, an

 5  Intensive Acceleration Class for retained grade 3 students who

 6  subsequently score at Level 1 on the reading portion of the

 7  FCAT. The focus of the Intensive Acceleration Class shall be

 8  to increase a child's reading level at least two grade levels

 9  in 1 school year. The Intensive Acceleration Class shall:

10         a.  Be provided to any student in grade 3 who scores at

11  Level 1 on the reading portion of the FCAT and who was

12  retained in grade 3 the prior year because of scoring at Level

13  1 on the reading portion of the FCAT.

14         b.  Have a reduced teacher-student ratio.

15         c.  Provide uninterrupted reading instruction for the

16  majority of student contact time each day and incorporate

17  opportunities to master the grade 4 Sunshine State Standards

18  in other core subject areas.

19         d.  Use a reading program that is scientifically

20  research-based and has proven results in accelerating student

21  reading achievement within the same school year.

22         e.  Provide intensive language and vocabulary

23  instruction using a scientifically research-based program,

24  including use of a speech-language therapist.

25         f.  Include weekly progress monitoring measures to

26  ensure progress is being made.

27         g.  Report to the Department of Education, in the

28  manner described by the department, the progress of students

29  in the class at the end of the first semester.

30         9.  Report to the State Board of Education, as

31  requested, on the specific intensive reading interventions and

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 1  supports implemented at the school district level. The

 2  Commissioner of Education shall annually prescribe the

 3  required components of requested reports.

 4         10.  Provide a student who has been retained in grade 3

 5  and has received intensive instructional services but is still

 6  not ready for grade promotion, as determined by the school

 7  district, the option of being placed in a transitional

 8  instructional setting. Such setting shall specifically be

 9  designed to produce learning gains sufficient to meet grade 4

10  performance standards while continuing to remediate the areas

11  of reading deficiency.

12         Section 4.  Paragraph (b) of subsection (3) of section

13  411.227, Florida Statutes, is amended to read:

14         411.227  Components of the Learning Gateway.--The

15  Learning Gateway system consists of the following components:

16         (3)  EARLY EDUCATION, SERVICES AND SUPPORTS.--

17         (b)  Demonstration projects shall develop strategies to

18  increase the use of appropriate intervention practices with

19  children who have learning problems and learning disabilities

20  within public and private early care and education programs

21  and K-3 public and private school settings. Strategies may

22  include training and technical assistance teams. Intervention

23  must be coordinated and must focus on providing effective

24  supports to children and their families within their regular

25  education and community environment. These strategies must

26  incorporate, as appropriate, school and district activities

27  related to the student's academic improvement plan and must

28  provide parents with greater access to community-based

29  services that should be available beyond the traditional

30  school day. Academic expectations for public school students

31  in grades K-3 must be based upon the local school board's

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 1  adopted proficiency levels. When appropriate, school personnel

 2  shall consult with the local Learning Gateway to identify

 3  other community resources for supporting the child and the

 4  family.

 5         Section 5.  Subsection (11) of section 1002.20, Florida

 6  Statutes, is amended to read:

 7         1002.20  K-12 student and parent rights.--Parents of

 8  public school students must receive accurate and timely

 9  information regarding their child's academic progress and must

10  be informed of ways they can help their child to succeed in

11  school. K-12 students and their parents are afforded numerous

12  statutory rights including, but not limited to, the following:

13         (11)  STUDENTS WITH READING DEFICIENCIES.--Each

14  elementary school shall regularly assess the reading ability

15  of each K-3 student. The parent of any K-3 student who

16  exhibits a reading deficiency shall be immediately notified of

17  the student's deficiency with a description and explanation,

18  in terms understandable to the parent, of the exact nature of

19  the student's difficulty in learning and lack of achievement

20  in reading; shall be consulted in the development of a

21  progress-monitoring detailed academic improvement plan, as

22  described in s. 1008.25(4)(b); and shall be informed that the

23  student will be given intensive reading instruction until the

24  deficiency is corrected. This subsection operates in addition

25  to the remediation and notification provisions contained in s.

26  1008.25 and in no way reduces the rights of a parent or the

27  responsibilities of a school district under that section.

28         Section 6.  Paragraph (n) of subsection (2) of section

29  1003.51, Florida Statutes, is amended to read:

30         1003.51  Other public educational services.--

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 1         (2)  The State Board of Education shall adopt and

 2  maintain an administrative rule articulating expectations for

 3  effective education programs for youth in Department of

 4  Juvenile Justice programs, including, but not limited to,

 5  education programs in juvenile justice commitment and

 6  detention facilities. The rule shall articulate policies and

 7  standards for education programs for youth in Department of

 8  Juvenile Justice programs and shall include the following:

 9         (n)  Performance expectations for providers and

10  district school boards, including the provision of a

11  progress-monitoring an academic improvement plan as required

12  in s. 1008.25.

13         Section 7.  Subsection (7) of section 1003.52, Florida

14  Statutes, is amended to read:

15         1003.52  Educational services in Department of Juvenile

16  Justice programs.--

17         (7)  A progress-monitoring An academic improvement plan

18  shall be developed for students who score below the level

19  specified in district school board policy in reading, writing,

20  and mathematics or below the level specified by the

21  Commissioner of Education on statewide assessments as required

22  by s. 1008.25. These plans shall address academic, literacy,

23  and life skills and shall include provisions for intensive

24  remedial instruction in the areas of weakness.

25         Section 8.  This act shall take effect July 1, 2006.

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